Listen to the notes of forever
In the corridors of your heart;
A random act of kindness,
A gesture of pure love
Stays in the lap of
Mother Nature
Long after
You are
Gone.
© Purba Chakraborty
16.04.2018
Note: This is a nonet. A nonet poem has nine lines. The first line has 9 syllables, 2nd line has 8 syllables, 3rd line has 7 syllables, 4th line has 6 syllables, 5th lines has 5 syllables, 6th line has 4syllables, 7th line has 3 syllables, 8th line has 2 syllables and 9th line has 1 syllable. Rhyming is optional and the poem can be on any subject.
There are some things, small gestures which stays forever in our heart and memories. A lovely nonet, Purba.
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Indeed :) Thank you, Rohan
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Thanks, Yamini :)
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I loved the way your nonet resonated with my heart leaving behind a great message dear
ReplyDeleteGlad it resonated with your heart dear :)
DeleteWonderful use of Nonet to express your soul's words. Loved the way you have used the syllables.
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Thank you so much, Sayanti :)
DeleteSo true and so beautifully expressed with the given rules of a nonet! Awesome, Purba!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Shilpa 😊
DeleteSo true Purba and so well expressed. Little good things and pure love goes long way
ReplyDeleteLovely Nonet with a thought that is dear to my heart.
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ReplyDeleteA very interesting and meaningful Nonet, Purba. Good day to you.
ReplyDeleteSO beautiful! Touched my heart <3
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ReplyDeleteLovely Nonet :) So true. Small gestures stays by far forever. All of the letters with their own form are so beautiful in their own way!
ReplyDeleteThat's the biggest religion, I feel and something every one should adopt! :)
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