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Sunday 17 January 2016

An Invisible Thread!



Her heart was laced
With fog and mist;
He wiped it clean 
With his amorous touch
And showed her 
The sparkling dreams
That languished there
Since years.

The gesture didn't demand
Ounces of intricate words;
It all happened in the
Canopy of a magical silence
With an assuring look
And an invisible thread
That bind their souls together
Since ages.

-Purba Chakraborty
14.01.2016



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75 comments:

  1. C.C.17 January 2016 at 12:05

    Love those first two opening lines.....so magical :-)

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi17 January 2016 at 13:32

    Beautiful! Such a sweet & romantic write Purba :D I adore this piece.
    Thank you so much for participating :D


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:23

      Aww...thank you so much, dear.
      So glad that you adore this piece. I totally enjoyed writing on the prompt.
      Much love <3

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  3. Deeshani17 January 2016 at 13:56

    Wow.. that's so romantic and ethereal.. Loved your choice of words to the core.. :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:24

      Thank you so much dear. Happy you loved it :) <3

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  4. Blogoratti17 January 2016 at 14:08

    Reads like a love song...a delightful read indeed. Warm greetings!

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  5. Prasanna Dasari17 January 2016 at 14:19

    Heart touching lines Purba, loved this poem :)

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  6. Jae Rose17 January 2016 at 16:09

    Some of the most uplifting and profound things do not require a lot of words - beautifully illustrated here

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:29

      Exactly, Jae. Too much explanations often confuse a person. Gestures matter more than words.
      Thank you so much :)

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  7. Old Egg17 January 2016 at 16:11

    What a beautiful poem of love and trust. Really beautiful.

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  8. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)17 January 2016 at 16:23

    absolutely wonderful loving words and wisdom for such a young soul

    gracias for sharing your heart

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:35

      I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for the beautiful comment :)

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  9. brudberg17 January 2016 at 17:23

    Love can be like that when it is at its best.

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  10. Mary17 January 2016 at 19:33

    A beautiful poem of connection and love!

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  11. Donna@LivingFromHappiness17 January 2016 at 22:08

    Oh Purba this is just so amazing....the way a heart can unbind another with 'Canopy of a magical silence'....it is blissful when it happens!

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:41

      Indeed Donna, it's blissful when someone can convey a lot in the canopy of magical silence.
      Thanks much for your lovely comment :)

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  12. Sherry Blue Sky17 January 2016 at 23:10

    This is really lovely.......

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  13. SuyashJ17 January 2016 at 23:41

    Canopy of a magical silence
    With an assuring look


    love these lines !

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  14. Alok singhal18 January 2016 at 02:25

    You've been inspiring me! Great work, again!

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:45

      Thank you so much, Alok. Your words are so encouraging :)

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  15. J.N.T.18 January 2016 at 02:54

    this was romantic. I enjoyed this silence very much. thanks!

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    1. Purba chakraborty18 January 2016 at 02:55

      I am so glad you enjoyed it, James. Thank you :)

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  16. Sangeeta Mishra18 January 2016 at 03:32

    The first four lines took my heart away
    "Her heart was laced
    With fog and mist;
    He wiped it clean
    With his amorous touch
    Very beautifully described Purba. Serene, calm, transcendent... love is all about speaking silence through hearts. It's neither told nor listened but felt.
    I can feel that silence in your words.

    Very beautifully expressed. :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty19 January 2016 at 02:33

      You've said it so beautifully, Ma'am. I am so happy that the first 4 lines of my poem could take away your heart. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. It's always a pleasure to see you here <3

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  17. Unknown18 January 2016 at 07:27

    Beautiful lines dear...your writing always impacts me so much...love reading your work :-)

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  18. ScottlB18 January 2016 at 07:32

    Really romantic poem,

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  19. Maniparna18 January 2016 at 08:57

    The immense romanticism in the lines...the soft words spoken in silence...just so serene and beautiful! ... :-)

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  20. Arvind Kumar18 January 2016 at 09:10

    First two lines blow me. Beautiful poem

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  21. M S Mahawar18 January 2016 at 09:33

    Beautiful Poem!

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  22. Sumana Roy18 January 2016 at 10:07

    ah...the invisible and silent thread of deep love...it's a beauty Purba...

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  23. Rajesh18 January 2016 at 10:58

    Beautiful and touchy.

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  24. Indrani18 January 2016 at 12:22

    Very beautifully expressed Purba.

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  25. Unknown18 January 2016 at 12:26

    Beautiful choice of words dear.. this is so ethereal. Kudos! :)

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  26. Rakesh18 January 2016 at 13:16

    What a lovely poem! The best of the romances are always muted and wordless. May be, that's what makes them immortal.

    Beautiful as ever, Purba! :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty19 January 2016 at 02:38

      I totally agree with you, Rakesh.
      Thank you so much. Glad you liked it :)

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  27. Anjali Sengar18 January 2016 at 14:11

    Such an awesome poem Purba :)

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  28. Susan18 January 2016 at 18:11

    "It all happened in the
    Canopy of a magical silence"

    How wonderful to have experienced this truth.

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  29. Tomichan Matheikal18 January 2016 at 19:34

    Filled with romance.

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  30. Debi Swim18 January 2016 at 20:10

    It all happened in the
    Canopy of a magical silence.... that caught my fancy also

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  31. Rat18 January 2016 at 21:18

    This is so magical. Love the flow of words, Purba :)

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  32. Purba chakraborty19 January 2016 at 02:33

    Thank you, Rosemary :)

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  33. Purba chakraborty19 January 2016 at 02:36

    Thanks :)

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  34. Unknown19 January 2016 at 06:18

    I rarely enjoy an English poem.
    And this is that rare thing. :)
    Good one Purba!

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    1. Purba chakraborty20 January 2016 at 05:41

      So glad to know that, Yogesh.
      Thank you so very much :)

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  35. Unknown19 January 2016 at 09:54

    It's a beautiful one Purba :-)
    Been missing you on Drishti :-(

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  36. Sachin Prabhu19 January 2016 at 19:10

    beautiful <3

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  37. Mridula19 January 2016 at 19:28

    Beautiful words!

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  38. Vinay Leo R.19 January 2016 at 23:24

    Silence can tell so much, and leave its mark more than words at times. :) I liked that it had something positive this time.

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    1. Purba chakraborty20 January 2016 at 05:43

      True. Silence is an enigma. It hurts as well as heals.
      Glad you liked it :)

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  39. Saru Singhal20 January 2016 at 00:51

    Loved it when you posted the first half on Instagram. Second verse added to the beauty of the poem. Too good, Purba.

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    1. Purba chakraborty20 January 2016 at 05:45

      Thank you so much, Saru. Means a lot when it comes from you. Glad you loved it dear :)

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  40. Sreeja21 January 2016 at 10:59

    Very romantic...meaningful silence!

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