You are like the mountain
I am like the sea
Miles between us,
I await your presence
with every ounce of hope.
The tired grey clouds
gather overhead;
They have travelled all
the way from you to me
carrying your message;
It soon starts raining
First drizzles, then showers
As the raindrops graze
my bare, weary skin,
I can hear your
vows of love
promises of eternity
kissing away all my tears
healing my pain and scars.
Purba Chakraborty
Beautiful as always and filled with longing
ReplyDeleteWhat wonderful imagery depicts longing of the soul
ReplyDeleteDeepika Sharma
Its a beautiful poem Purba, with raindrops and its feel.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteYou are like the mountain I am like the sea....loved it
ReplyDeletelovely poem. mountains rains and the feels
ReplyDeleteI can hear your vows of love, promises of eternity kissing away all my tears, healing my pain and scars. Aah! Deja Vu for me! I can relate to every word of this expression.
ReplyDeleteThe cloud messenger gets quite a make over through your lines full of imagery and emotions.
ReplyDeleteThis heart warming filled with passion & longing!
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