The opaline dew drops
Shimmering on the blades of grass;
The pearly tear drops
Glistening on the word-filled pages
Speaks of an affair, mystic and beautiful.
A conversation in the emptiness of night
That happily dies with the morning sun
So that it can be reborn again at night
Away from prying eyes
In the lap of starry, ethereal silence.
-Purba Chakraborty
2.11.2016
Your words paint a beautiful image. Love it Purba.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kiran :)
DeleteNice assembly of words. Short and sweet!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tuhin :)
DeleteThe last line is so surreal! Amazing work.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Alok :)
DeleteThis poem can be compared to a classic painting. Any reader can effortlessly fall in love with it.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful compliment. Thank you so much :)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you MS :)
DeleteYou know buddy the best writers are the ones who make you see through the words and you sure are one of them.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear. It means a lot to me :)
Deletenice lines, great
ReplyDeleteI like it. Short and crisp. Very well written dear :)
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DeleteLove the ethereal silence. Beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Vishal :)
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ReplyDeleteA beautiful combinations of the visual and the psychological world
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the wonderful comment :)
Deletethat si a lovely poem
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Thank you Bikram :)
DeleteBeautiful as always, which reminds me that I had totally forgotten about your book The HEart Listens to No one. Will have to install Kindle again on my phone to complete it :D
ReplyDeleteBTW learnt a new word opaline :D
Thank you, Anmol.
DeleteI hope you complete reading the book and like it :)
I'm a lazy reader on Kindle, but I had read 3-4 and yeah I liked them. Hoping to finish it soon now that I have remembered reading it :D
DeleteMesmerizing like the beauty of dew drops....!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :)
DeleteThank you Rupam :)
ReplyDeleteAs magnificent as the dew drops! Kudos dear :)
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate your professional approach. These are pieces of very useful information that will be of great use for me in future.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteLovely thoughts Purba!
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