The chaos and the cauldron
The angst and the fears
The bitter pangs of loss
Let them not cloud your vision
Let them not take away
The love, compassion and hope;
The sweet music divine
From your heart.
Embrace solitude in a park
Bask in the beauty of the lush greenery
Reflect, admire, smile.
Allow Nature to soothe you
And cleanse the burden of your heart.
Let love be the lyrics
Let kindness be the music
Let your heart sing forever!
Linking this poem to Midweek Motif ~ 'Let your song be delicate'
love this combo of the harsh and the delicate...the closing lines are exquisite....
ReplyDeleteLove the advice singing through this stunning piece :D
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the saying "music can soothe the savage beast"
ReplyDeleteYour poem speaks of our need to be calmed.
Well done
With kindness as the music, and with love as the lyrics, what a lovely life this would be! Your poem is very uplifting, Purba. Really brightened my day.
ReplyDeleteThis is very beautiful and uplifting.....I especially adore the closing three lines. Beautifully done. You are an Old Soul, Purba!
ReplyDeleteAffectionate poem Purba :):) Very nice lines.
ReplyDeleteThis song could help someone turn the corner from negative to positive, I think. Bravo.
ReplyDeleteA great feeling of happiness emanates from these wise words!
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written Purba. Let the mist not overshadow our aura ! Your positivity is simply pouring out of these beautiful words. Very inspiring. :)
ReplyDeleteIt was delightful to read this. Such beautiful advice. Thank you Purba.
ReplyDeleteSo well said especially the last 3 lines.. Thanks for sharing, Purba!
ReplyDeleteVery nice purba...... heart touching...
ReplyDeletelove the last para... beautiful Purba...
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Awesome lines Purba.. Love it :)
ReplyDeleteLovely!..last lines are so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLovely flow of words from a singing heart. :)
ReplyDeleteliked it so much ! especially last 3 lines :)
ReplyDeleteliked it so much ! especially last 3 lines :)
ReplyDeleteLove happily is the lyrics in much of what I write, May it also be for you too Purba.
ReplyDeleteI love this line Purba - the angst of fear and the pangs of loss. Not just the rhyme in words, the meaning they add to the poetry as well. very powerful :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderfully open poem - yes..to take pause and see the good things in life is both the simplest thing and often the hardest thing to achieve
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed. Love the smooth flow of words.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully woven...the positivity and optimism and the triumph of good over evil... :-)
ReplyDeletebeautiful......will you call it a heart that sings no song...let love make you sing and let kindness flow in all directions.....:)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully presented the secret of happy life. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned. Love the last 3 lines. :)
ReplyDeleteThe best ......... "Let kindness be the music"
ReplyDeleteI agree with Sherry, those last lines are a benediction.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteI so agree nature and music both are great healers.
ReplyDeleteLike your blog a lot Purba!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful... we have the choice to create the music of our own life :)
ReplyDeleteSuch lovely lines, Purba. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely creation... A good optimistic and inspiring poem... liked it... :-)
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful :)
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