The roaring thunder and the vigorous pouring of rain
was enough to predict that it was a bizarre night. Rajeev has been working
overtime that day. He reached the bus stop finally, when it was 9pm. The bus
stop was secluded and instantly, Rajeev worried about getting a bus so that he
can reach home.
It was still raining heavily and the clouds were
clattering every few minutes. After Rajeev seated himself at the bus stop, his
eyes rested on a woman who sat at the extreme corner.
She was covered with a stole right from her head and
therefore, Rajeev couldn’t catch a glimpse of her face. He got up from his seat
and sat beside the woman, intending to talk to her. He cleared his throat to
make her aware of his presence.
The woman didn’t respond until a strong wind hit her
face that resulted in the stole to fall down from her head. She was definitely
the most attractive woman Rajeev has ever seen, courtesy her beautiful eyes.
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His eyes were transfixed on her and finally the
woman looked at him. Rajeev noticed that the woman gazed at him, as if she knew
him, as if she wanted to tell him something. It was an unusual gaze, her eyes
brimming with excitement, eagerness, angst and pathos. She mumbled a few words,
which were inaudible to Rajeev.
Rajeev took his eyes off her, but even after a few seconds,
he realized that she was ogling at him. He was definitely happy that he was
being gazed by such a beautiful woman, but then, it was also awkward.
“Rajeev Sengupta. What’s your name?” He asked the
woman.
After a long silence for two minutes, she replied “Meera.”
Rajeev kept talking to Meera. However, all the
talking was mostly done by him. The lady barely replied in monosyllables, albeit
her gaze intact on Rajeev. There was no hint of the rain to stop. Rajeev could
see that Meera was trembling slightly due to the chill in the air.
“Would you like to have a cup of tea?” Rajeev
offered, empathizing with Meera’s condition.
Meera nodded her head. Rajeev assured her that he
would be back within a few minutes and went to the nearest tea stall which he
knew would be open even at that hour.
I
never knew I was so good looking that a beautiful lady would turn speechless on
seeing me. Yes, Meera is a little weird, but anyone can die for those beautiful
eyes. I need to take her number.
Rajeev soliloquized as he bought two cups of tea. He
rushed towards the bus stop, but to his sheer disappointment, he saw a bus
moving past him and Meera looking at him from the window with the same intent
gaze.
It broke his heart as he realized that Meera was
gone. With dismay, he sat on the bus stop sipping his tea silently when he
noticed a piece of paper on the floor getting to and fro with the direction of the
wind. He picked the paper instantly and opened it.
You
look exactly like my husband who had passed away three years ago. It took me a
while to realize that you are Rajeev and not my Jai. God bless you.
Meera
Rajeev swallowed the lump that was formed in his
throat. He looked at the direction where the bus went by. He read the note
again, things registering in his mind slowly.
If
only I could meet Meera again! If only this story hasn’t finished here…
What a heart touching story! How we wish some stories had an ending...and sometimes its best that it's left the way it was.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sonia :)
DeleteI totally agree with you...some stories are better left unfinished the way some words are better left unsaid...
beautifully penned Purba :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Archana :)
DeleteWow. I was stumped by the twist. Loved every bit of it. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. So glad you loved it, Sayantan.
DeleteAnd a warm welcome to my blog :)
liked the twist in story :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked, Sachin :)
Deletewow purba....loved it.....
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sunaina. Glad you loved it :)
DeleteIf it were true, I don't think Rajeev would forget here easily, neither would she. Great story.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you, Alok. Thanks a ton :)
DeleteLoved the twist. Heart touching!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Simran :)
DeleteIf only the story continues... Brilliant. loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear...some stories have incomplete endings and this is one such story :)
DeleteWow Story !!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anuja :)
DeleteBeautifully written !
ReplyDeleteNice read.. I like incomplete endings :)
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Thanks, Ananya :)
DeleteWhen I started reading the story, A question came to my mind, Why Meera was answering to a stranger, was she not afraid. Now I knew. Suspense till the end, You have described the situation, palce so aptly that I was imagining it while reading. But you know I hate such endings , why it is not Happily ever after in every story. :(
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for liking the story. I am so glad that you could picturize the entire situation and place. It's true dear that incomplete endings hurt...but what seems incomplete today may become complete tomorrow. Cheers :)
DeleteBeautiful Story Purba!!! Really a nice read!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Madhumita :)
DeleteHey, wow!
ReplyDeleteI always thought I twist stories! But, you take the cake! Afreen, ma'am!
Thanks a lot, Rakesh :)
DeleteHeart touching!
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