The symphony of sea waves
Pacified her weary soul;
But as her tears
Escaped in the sea,
The waves sang
A melancholic lullaby.
Forsaken by all
She found a true mate
In the sea;
Who reciprocated
Her companionship instantly
Through its endless waves.
Sitting by the shore
She kept narrating her story
And looked for an answer;
There were none
Apart from the
Murmuring sound of the waves.
Her sad, sullen face
Carried a serene hue
As she deciphered the message;
RISE AFTER FALL
NEVER GIVE IT UP
TILL YOU HAVE IT ALL!
A beautiful message well deciphered Purba !
ReplyDeleteLoved it :)
I always like going to beaches :) serenity which one can feel ! which indeed helps to forget all the worries in world. nice poem di :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely Sachin. I love beaches and sea always inspires me :)
Delete"a melancholic lullaby''- I loved this phrase. The words are soft, soothing and yet with a powerful message... :-) Beautifully done Purba....
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Maniparna. So glad you loved the phrase :)
DeleteHi Purba! Glad to land on this post of your blog. Beautifully written the emotions. And sea-waves are indeed the greatest healers.
ReplyDeleteHello Tara! A very warm welcome to my blog. Thank you so much :)
DeleteTrue. And such powerful words in d end. Love it!
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it dear :)
DeleteAnd the melancholy lullaby certainy won my heart! Beautiful poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sonia :)
DeleteSuch wonderful lines you write. You are such a gifted writer and poetess. The lines touch the heart and are so soulful and that's what makes all the difference. Loved it. :-) :D
ReplyDeleteGaurab, thanks for these hugely encouraging words. Means a lot, dear! Thank you so much and I am glad that you loved it :)
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem. Loved it, would be an understatement. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, dear. So happy! :)
DeleteTrue and such powerful message Love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Kirti :)
Deletevery beautiful and lyrical purba.....loved the first four lines.....the melancholic lullaby....just beautiful....
ReplyDeleteThanks Sunaina. Glad you loved it :)
Deletebeautiful poem and amazing pic :-)
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Thank you Swati :)
DeleteA very warm welcome to my blog.
Don't know...
ReplyDeleteIt reminded me somehow of William Wordsworth and his famous 'The woods are lovely dark and deep... '
You are too good, Purba! I just was engrossed in the flow of the words.
I can only complement you in the best possible way!
Wish, I'd have written it! :)
Oh my God! This was such a huge compliment. I am elated that my verses reminded you of William Wordsworth. I have been an ardent admirer of Wordworth right from my school days. Thank you so much.
DeleteAnd a very warm welcome to my blog :)
Nice poem, with much inspiring last lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Swati :)
DeleteThat's a wonderful message, love your way of thinking.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Alok :)
DeleteAwesome lines. lyrical and soulful. nice picture too :)
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Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteKeep writing! Great work.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Indrani :)
Deleteबहुत सामयिक एवं सटीक रचना ! इन बढ़ते कदमों को कोई ना रोक सके यही होना भी चाहिये ! बेह्तरीन रचना ! बधाई !
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Your words are really encouraging! :)
DeleteBeautifully depicted :) (some glitches in commenting. Not sure if some are getting posted :D ) Cheers.
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