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Wednesday, 21 April 2021

Raindrops on my skin (Magic and Alchemy)

 


You are like the mountain
I am like the sea
Miles between us, 
I await your presence
with every ounce of hope.
The tired grey clouds 
gather overhead;
They have travelled all
the way from you to me
carrying your message;
It soon starts raining
First drizzles, then showers
As the raindrops graze
my bare, weary skin, 
I can hear your 
vows of love
promises of eternity
kissing away all my tears
healing my pain and scars. 

Purba Chakraborty

21.04.2021

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9 comments:

  1. Leha21 April 2021 at 21:03

    Beautiful as always and filled with longing

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  2. Deepika21 April 2021 at 23:35

    What wonderful imagery depicts longing of the soul
    Deepika Sharma

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  3. Pr@Gun22 April 2021 at 00:05

    Its a beautiful poem Purba, with raindrops and its feel.

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  4. rupam sarma22 April 2021 at 15:02

    Beautiful poem.

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  5. Chetan Maheshwari22 April 2021 at 17:00

    You are like the mountain I am like the sea....loved it

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  6. sadvika annam23 April 2021 at 05:55

    lovely poem. mountains rains and the feels

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  7. जितेन्द्र माथुर23 April 2021 at 09:44

    I can hear your vows of love, promises of eternity kissing away all my tears, healing my pain and scars. Aah! Deja Vu for me! I can relate to every word of this expression.

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  8. Durga Prasad Dash23 April 2021 at 23:21

    The cloud messenger gets quite a make over through your lines full of imagery and emotions.

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  9. Chinmayee Gayatree Sahu25 April 2021 at 19:04

    This heart warming filled with passion & longing!

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