It came to consume me
To thrash me down
to the pebbled floor
To thrash me down
to the pebbled floor
To laugh at my
tears and blood-tinted lesions;
Like a barbarous sadist,
It reveled in my misery;
The more I whined,
the more it was unkind
Till I ogled at it
With a bona fide smile
and stood up after a while.
"You are no foe,
but a teacher in disguise",
Saying this, I held its hand.
Dancing with a cyclone
Round and round, I was thrown
I fell, I got hurt, yet I stood up
Dancing with a cyclone
Round and round, I won.
I learned my strengths as
I matched its footsteps;
Finally, when it was gone
From caterpillar, a butterfly was born.
Wow! Another great one from you. Really motivating to start another week of A2Z.
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Such a philosophical poem! No doubt, when calamities come the best way is to accept first of all.
ReplyDeleteWell penned.
ReplyDeleteTill i ogled at it with a bonafide smile
ReplyDeleteThat's the way to look at all the adversities in our life
Lovely thoughts
Deepika Sharma
Your poems are such a motivational thing to read each morning. Love it
ReplyDeleteA delightful read and a wonderful message - hardship make you strong
ReplyDeleteLovely. Dancing with the Cyclone. NIceee... Keep going and keep writing these wonderful verses.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for A to Z
Beautifully crafted Purba.
ReplyDeleteAnd the hardest moments of our life are our best teachers--as long as we're ready to embrace their wisdom.
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You really write so well and your poems touches heart!!
ReplyDeleteThis has all the elements a good poem...the title, structure, word- selection, ending , message- everything is well balanced and perfect
ReplyDeleteThis is a true masterpiece Purba... Such powerful and inspiring words.. I couldn't help reading it multiple times to soak in the words
ReplyDeletebeautiful piece
ReplyDeleteDancing with a cyclone! What a wonderful way to overcome moments of despair! Absolutely lovely!
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This is truly inspiring and I loved the positivity with which you showcased the emotions.
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