Some
people
touch our lives
with such bright hues
they cannot be wiped from our existence.
Their imprints deepen in our soul daily
like roots of trees
cobalt dyes
timeless
ties.
© Purba Chakraborty
23.04.2018
Note: This is a Double Tetractys. Tetractys is a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consisting of at least 5 lines with the syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10.
Double Tetractys consists of 10 lines and follows the syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. This poetry form is used to express a complete thought within the mentioned syllable count.
Beautiful words
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Timeless ties"
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some people touch our lives with bright hues that cant be wiped.. so true.. few really make a turning point in our life.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poetic style. It looks like a triangle. Great going, dear.
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Hari OM
ReplyDeleteIt makes a wonderful graphic as a whole, as well as painting perfectly in its phrasing... YAM xx
Wow! This is a unique form of poetry. And you have done total justice to it.
ReplyDeleteYou are undoubtedly one such special person for me dear Purba, it’s immaterial how much we talk or that we haven’t yet met, stay blessed love 😘😊♥️
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful, esp, Their imprints deepen in our soul daily and how it deepens into timeless ties. The form and the poetry so well done :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed. And again, beautifully penned down. Also, I loved this form of poetry.
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