Dear girl, Stop!
Don't do that to yourself.
A couple of people might be cruel to you
You don't need to be cruel to yourself;
Look away from the arduous wounds,
Don't pinch or touch them
Let them be.
Have faith in the greatest healer, Time
The scars will evaporate like magic,
You won't even understand how and when.
Embrace yourself today!
Embrace life with all your love,
Breathe, Smile, Live!
Let the positive energy flow into your heart
Drop the baggage that robs you off life,
You are stronger than your wounds
Your life is much larger than your pain.
Have faith in the greatest healer, Time
Embrace yourself today!
Embrace life with all your love,
Breathe, Smile, Live!
Linking this poem with Poetry Pantry #272
Extremely motivating...can't express in words, how much I loved it :) Beautifully written as always swthrt <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear. So glad you loved it <3
DeleteI love the passion & emotion with which you write.. indeed time is the greatest healer :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully executed.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thank you so much Sanaa. Your words mean a lot. Much love <3
DeleteYes, I think we really need to love ourselves first! We should be the most important person in our own lives. Hopefully, with time, pain goes away.....and is replaced by something even better than what was lost.
ReplyDeleteExactly Mary. This is what we need to do to live a beautiful life :)
DeleteTime is the greatest healer of all the wounds but it leaves scars. And you have to be brave enough to fight with time and to erase those scars. Every girl has that power to move the winds towards her good.
ReplyDeleteVery motivational words Purba ! Your poem would surely inspire every girl to wait, fight and live life on her conditions. Inspiring, beautiful & meaningful. Kudos ! :)
Exactly Ma'am. You have said that so right.
DeleteThank you so much. Your comments make me so happy and encourage me to write better. Much love <3
How beautifully you have penned down your thoughts ..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sangeeta :)
DeleteA lot of zest in your lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteA very strong words to get the strength to anyone who reads this. Simply amazing lines Purba :):)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Prasanna :)
DeleteVery inspiring! Can raise any and every drooping soul. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :)
DeleteOh that was a lovely piece.Inspiring lines, Purba.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Panchali Ma'am :)
DeleteMy god...amazing you write dear...such powerful lines. Words which everyone can relate to are the words of true wisdom. Time is really powerful. There is so much you have said in these few lines... :-) :D
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Gaurab. I wrote this poem with the sole motive that I can help atleast one person in distress. Your words made me feel that I can achieve the goal. After all, if my writing can provide solace to even one person, I would consider my writing to be fruitful. Thanks again for the lovely comment :)
Delete"Let them be."...the only mantra to move on...a beautiful and uplifting poem Purba...
ReplyDeleteExactly. Thank you so much, Sumana Ma'am :)
DeleteI think that most scars heals with time, and going fort embracing yourself is a great way to reach that.. love the positivism of your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I totally agree with you :)
DeleteYou are a shiny person for sure with a creative soul too, Purba Always a pleasure to visit your work, as a kindred spirit With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Scott. Your words made my day so much brighter :)
DeleteThere is a beautiful and wise message in your poem, Purba. Your inner wisdom always amazes me, as I look at your photo, and remember you are young - but an Old Soul. This poem makes me think of a dear friend who is hurting, and wishing she could know your words are meant for her.
ReplyDeleteAww Sherry...I love it when you call me Old Soul. Thank you so much for always encouraging me and showering such lovely words on me. I feel so glad and grateful :)
DeleteI seriously wish if your friend could read this poem.
Great advice not to poke and pick at and worsen the wounds. Even if the scars don't magically disappear, they can remind us of the wisdom with which we went on to embrace and love our selves.
ReplyDeleteOften we poke our wounds so much that they take longer time to heal. Thank you, Susan :)
DeleteVery inspirational
ReplyDeleteHave a nice Sunday
Much love...
Thank you, Gillena.
DeleteI have a niece who started cutting herself when she was 12...a cry for help thankfully was heard as she is beautiful and talented but was being bullied so badly in school. Beautiful, powerful words for all young girls.
ReplyDeleteThat's so painful, Donna. My heart pains to see girls in such condition. Hope my words reach all the girls in agony and distress. Thank you so much for your comment :)
DeleteNow this is very good Purba. When young we are devastated with the smallest of hurts and disappointments. If we are lucky we soon realize that is all part of life and how we handle it can make us stronger and wiser.
ReplyDeleteLife is all about conquering one battle after another. Thank you so much :)
DeleteI totally agree with you. Time is the greatest healer. Have faith and hope.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed. Be your own best friend and lover...nicely happily motivating. Spencer is Kanzensakura
ReplyDeleteExactly Toni. That's how life should be lived.
DeleteImpatience often the cause of lots of disappointments! Thoughtful write Purba!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :)
DeleteGreat advice and well written... good for you.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Thank you :)
DeleteWe need time, and often it brings the best healing powers; well written :)
ReplyDeleteExactly, Teny. Thank you :)
DeleteVery inspiring, Purba. Time is the greatest healer of all the wounds but it leaves scars.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThis poem can be inspiration for lot of girls :) Nice job Purba..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Anjali :)
DeleteBreathe, smile live is a wonderful adage - hard to achieve but thankfully there are some kind souls who still say stop - give it a try..thankfully
ReplyDeleteSo true. Totally agree with you, Jae.
DeleteYes we should like ourselves.
ReplyDeleteExactly!
DeleteA highly motivational write-up,Purba. Happened to visit your blog and absolutely loved the message
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. So glad you liked it :)
DeleteThat's a lovely expression... as always...
ReplyDeletethe picture is very sweet too... :-)
Thank you so much, dearie :)
DeleteThis is very motivating. So true that time heals wounds. It takes faith to accept that when one is in pain though. But your advice is strong, true and given with a beautiful energy.
ReplyDeleteExactly Myrna. It's tough to believe that when one is in sheer pain.
DeleteThank you so much :)
Time is indeed a great healer, Purba. And I have experienced it myself, firsthand. Well said!!!
ReplyDeleteSame here, Abhijit. Thank you :)
DeleteVery touching poem.
ReplyDeleteThis too shall pass is my favorite tag line!
ReplyDeleteMine too :)
DeleteYour Writings seems to have no bounds.. Too encouraging, Purba.. Well written!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sir. Such encouraging comments from you mean a lot :)
DeleteBeautifully expressed...as always..Lovely Poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much MS :)
DeleteWhat loving wisdom!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary :)
DeleteWonderful lines. and very uplifting. loved it
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Meera :)
DeleteI bet these lines speak to each and every one of your readers, Purba.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Meera -- very uplifting indeed.
I hope you are having a great week. :)
Thank you so much Divya :)
DeleteGlad you liked it.
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ReplyDeletetime indeed is great healer :) each line of poem brings in positivity :) keep writing didi <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sachin. Great to see you here :)
Deletevery nice lines i like the way way you have explained
ReplyDeleteRegards
Rosy
Thank you, Rosy :)
DeleteLovely poem Purba. Full of positivity. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Somali :)
DeleteRightly said ..... You don't need to be cruel to yourself.
ReplyDeleteSome people go on a guilt trip.
Time is best healer and teaches you everything with time.
ReplyDeleteWonderful blog. :)
Great work purba.. its a very Lovely poem.
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