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Monday 20 July 2015

Unknown yet Known (Flash Fiction)

Finally, she has found the address of her solace. When loneliness and depression doesn’t let her write or sleep at night, she quietly plugs the earphones in her ear and starts watching his videos on YouTube. His magical voice accompanied with his guitar placates her and makes her forget everything that torments her in this world. She waits every day for him to upload a new cover on his channel. Without knowing him, it seems that he is the closest to her.

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He wonders how she could write exactly those words that he longs to hear from someone close to him. Her words soothe him and ebb down all his restlessness. Her words make him feel that he is not alone. Whenever he is not singing, he finds himself visiting her blog. He resides there someday for as long as three hours, reading and re-reading her. Uncanny how, she never seems unknown to him despite the fact that he doesn’t really know her. 
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43 comments:

  1. Deeshani20 July 2015 at 03:03

    Perhaps, they are connected by heart :) I could imagine a great story out of it and I'm curious to know what happens next in their lives :) A wonderful read, dear.

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    1. Saru Singhal20 July 2015 at 21:11

      I agree with Deeshani!

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    2. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:38

      Thank you so much, Deeshani. I was also visualizing the story but then just wrapped it up in this flash fiction :)

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  2. Deeshani20 July 2015 at 03:03

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  3. Sachin Prabhu20 July 2015 at 03:04

    beautiful :)

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  4. Dipanwita Chakraborty20 July 2015 at 03:10

    Amazing :)

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  5. Blogoratti20 July 2015 at 04:00

    That was a lovely read.

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  6. Anonymous20 July 2015 at 04:46

    Simple and sweet.

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  7. Rat20 July 2015 at 08:19

    And that's the beauty of it.. Lovely read to start my day with... :)
    A Rat's Nibble

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  8. Simran20 July 2015 at 08:50

    Ah! so beautiful :)
    Love through each other's "presence".

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  9. Ravish Mani20 July 2015 at 08:57

    Beautiful story, Purba. What I like most in your works is the way you deal emotions. Your ability to empathize is great. Your readers easily connect with your protagonists. Another quality of a great author.Kudos! :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:44

      Thanks for this wonderful compliment, Ravish. It made my day :)

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  10. Adicrazy20 July 2015 at 09:29

    Wow, this is beautiful! In just a few words, you made a story so touching and - I'm just wowed. Beautiful!
    Aditi's Monologue

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:45

      Thank you so much Aditi. Very happy to see you here :)

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  11. Unknown20 July 2015 at 10:38

    This piece is so enthralling... and you totally bowled me over with your soulful outflow of emotions as always dear. No matter they're far apart from each other, there is still a strong heart to heart connection between them that is weaved so beautifully by you... You have empathized it poignantly and I loved it to the core <3 Hugs!

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:46

      And your comments always enthrall me and make me super happy dear. I am so glad that you loved it. Thanks a ton. Hugs <3

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  12. kashpals20 July 2015 at 11:21

    Beautiful post :)

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  13. Anjali Sengar20 July 2015 at 11:53

    Lovely post Purba.. Must say you are a powerful author :)

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  14. Indrani20 July 2015 at 16:01

    That is an untold connection. :) But very nicely told by you. :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:48

      Exactly. And I really love these connections. Thanks Indrani :)

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  15. Mridula20 July 2015 at 17:21

    She should go and comment with her blog URl and he should with the Youtube channel link :D Me, the killjoy :D

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:49

      ha ha :D exactly! It would be fun to see their reactions then :P

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  16. Unknown20 July 2015 at 18:04

    What a wonderful read Purba! :-)

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  17. Unknown20 July 2015 at 18:45

    wow that was something....again proven love needs no medium....no physical presence...it is known and acknowledged where it belongs :) beautiful story. :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:50

      You have put that so beautifully, Shweta. How true is that...the power of true love! Thanks babe :)

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  18. Saru Singhal20 July 2015 at 21:12

    It's very mystical and beautiful. I marvel how art in any form can connect two souls. Beautiful idea and lovely narration.

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:51

      Yes, Saru it is really so incredible how art connects people. Somehow, I love these mystical connections a lot. Thank you so much :)

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  19. Anonymous21 July 2015 at 11:24

    Resonates with me too.

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  20. Roma Gupta Sinha21 July 2015 at 11:27

    Soulful Story my Dear, left the readers intrigued...Read you for the first time darling and it touched my heart <3 Deep heartfelt appreciation :)

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:54

      Thank you so much, dear. Very happy to see you here and so glad that you loved the post :)

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  21. Sreedhar Bhattaram21 July 2015 at 19:22

    The Love spread out in Nature truly searches and brings two souls together forever.. A Great Concept well penned!

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:55

      First of all, I am so happy to see you here, Sir. And your wonderful comment made my day. Thank you :)

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  22. Unknown21 July 2015 at 20:11

    Not everything can be explained with science. Certain things are better explained with stories as the connect two people may feel without knowing each other. Nice concept for the story that you have framed so nicely Purba. :-)

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    1. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 23:57

      You have said it so perfectly, Somali. Some things are really beyond logic and rationale. Thanks a lot, dear :)

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